Wednesday, August 17, 2011

Who moved my cheese?

Who moved my cheese?
책 썸네일Can you venture although you are living a great life? Can you change and dispose the abrupt variation?
Maybe, majority people mind the changes and can't dispose it well and also, they are abstracted because of their satisfaction of their lifes and situations. For them and for the modern people in the modernsociety which is changing everything rapidly, This book and its contents il be the greatest materials to survive these days.
There are four characters: two kids and two mice. The two kids are Hem and Hur and the two mic are Sniff and Scurry. They were looking for the cheese ware houses and then they found it. There a lot amount of cheese, so they never considered the cheese will be running out. After few weeks, the two mice notice the cheese is running out and venture to find another place, however the two kids didn't realize and didn't care about that. After few days ater, finally Hu knew that, but because of failure to persuade Hem to go to find another place, just Hur go to venture to find that. Each paths that he went, he wrote some sayings which he made. Eventually, Hur found another ware house where two mice are, and at the end of the story the two mice and Hur just heard some walking sounds and they just predict it must be Hem and the story ends.
For two kids, Hur and Hem and two mice, Sniff and Scurry, the cheese is the vital , essential and necessary thing to survive their lifes. Although they found the ware house which contained a lot of cheese and they think they are no risk for them, There was the deadly damage and change for them. Two mice gave changes to them, however the two kids didn't. So, Hur was almost dead and we don't know hem whether he is still live or not. Like that, there are a lot of risks like that story, but we can be easily abstracted because of the good condition. If we still do it, we can be two kids or not we can survive like two mice. We must not be abstracted and ready for the sudden changes. I know you guys can't be touched because you didn't have experience. I hope you guys realize and are touched the meaning of that book and fulfill it in your life.
After 3months, the new version of electronic gadgets will be emerged and a lot of information will be shared and your situation will be changed. If you have very important decision about your life, Don't be afraid of it. Although it's the unvoidable situation and you have to give changes, Don't be afraid of it. Just do it. If you avoid it, the happiness is just lasted at that time. Follow your correct way of your life, Don't be abstracted and Prepare perfectly or do your best. If you do that, although there are some deadly risks happened to you, you handle the crises with your smile.

Sunday, August 14, 2011

The ode for my sweat

Into my skin,
There is somrthing
Which takes my warmness
Which take my water

Oh my lovely(?) swaet!
Even if you help me
Please don't smeel bad
If you still  do this'
You have to pack it up!

The creative Essay

The time machine
 I was very nervous. I can’t believe it I’m still alive. I can’t classify whether this is the actuality or not. Although I can see my family and dudes, I wander it’s true or not. I didn’t believe God, I didn’t pray for God. Before, that happened………………………
My name is Harry. I am sixteen years old and I’m the ninth grade in John’s international school. Our school is terrible except that mountain where I climb everyday. There are some places to ban to enter. Our ware house, the edge of the playground and the entrance of that mountain is the place which not allowed to enter. Also, Every Saturday, the men who wear the clothes for protecting from the radioactivity inspect those places. Anyway, I don’t care about it, after the bell ring, I run to the mountain. Unfortunately, It’s raining. Although this bad condition, my plan to go to mountain isn’t won’t be changed. When I went to the mountain, It was still raining. I was walking on the woods when suddenly, I found something. It was the millions of foot prints. I followed it and there was a house. The house was covered by iron, and just one door wasn’t. I approached carefully and there was some sounds. It was dialogue with someone. I saw the window and I could see the military uniform through it. I heard the conversation and listened to it very carefully. Rach Sand, the marine said “Because of you we suck on this place about 5 years! I want to get out. Because of that moment you pressed the button. I said don’t press it! Because of that I think we have sucked this house! Damn!!!!!” Sop Mac, the captain of marine said “Hey guys be quiet! Calm down! Let’s think about it. Let’s think about this ball first. How can we use this ball? It has four blanks to put the number and the button!” Alex Ram, the marine said “Just dumps it throws away through that window!” I got that ball. It had the button and four blanks to put the numbers. At that moment, Rach said “If we can go back to 2015, we can stop this horrible situation.” Then I put 2015 and press the button. And then everything was disappeared. There was a big wind and a piece of paper covers my face. I read that paper and the paper said ‘ The real winners never shakes hands although they win’ As soon as I read the paper, I was in some forests. There was no house and I heard some sound of machine. I looked around and I can find the soldiers. I don’t know who are they and I can realize they are the soldiers who were talking in the house by listening the voices. Also, there was an enormous basement where there was a lot of tanks and have the missile silo. Rach said “ Our mission is destroy this basement. We don’t have enough amounts of dynamites. How can we ruin this?” “ Don’t worry about it. I’m the captain of marine. I’m sop Mac. There is one nuclear missile so, we can explode the silo and because of the explosion of the nuclear missile all basements will be destroyed, even this forests and that town.” “Sir! I’m Alex Ram although my level is lower than you, I think it’s not good because it can damage to the general people. “It doesn’t matter. We are the soldiers. We have to accomplish our duty, although there are some scapegoats.“ But, captain Sop Mac! Our duty and the essence of this mission is to protect our nations and people. It can violate this!” “Shut up! We have to remove it immediately, and then we have to consider the safety. It isn’t related these people, but also for the mankind! I suggest you don’t complain this mission!” “Yes Sir!” And then they rushed forward to the base. I followed them because of this mission could make them to have a bad situation . I don’t know how to enter that base, but I got the paper again. And It said “Time waits for no one!” And there was a sound like an alarm clock. I realized I have to stop them as fast as possible, but I wondered what does the first paper mean? I think It means ‘Don’t be abstracted!’ I went to the missile silo. There were a lot of soldiers’ dead bodies. And I could see they were setting up the something. They were hacking the nuclear missile. And the alarm sounded “ 5 minutes left to lunch. And they closed the entrance of the missile. I think they tried to explode the missile! I went to them and shouted “No! Listen me You will repent it! Stop it! They didn’t reply. I think they couldn’t hear my voice. I threw the time machine to the captain. And captain caught the time machine and he said “ Oh my god! I saw it in my dream. Hey guys! Did you see that?” “ Hmmm… Oh I saw it in my dream yesterday!” “ Me too !” “ And somebody said stop it! General! I think we have to stop it!” “Look! There is a kid! I saw him in my dream! He said stop it unless we will repent!” “No! It’s just a dream. We are the soldiers although we can all die we have to perform our mission! This is the real soldier!” “ Sir everybody except you agree to stop it! Listen to me carefully, We entered this base without any risks. Do we need to destroy it? Just conquer this place by calling the army to reinforce us!” “Hmmm, Actually I doubt of that part. Ok Everyone!  Do you believe me? Let’s conquer this place and Let’s get the glorious victory!” “Yes sir! Go!!!!!!” The alarm sound was stopped and also launching the missile was canceled. After approximately 1 hour¸ the base was conquered without any army to reinforce them! They all were survived. And There was a wind and I got a piece of paper. It said “Yesterday is the history, Future is the mystery and Present I the present.” I think I have to go back to the actuality. As soon as read that paper There were the soldiers and the black hole. The soldiers said me “Thank you very much And I appreciate your kindness and Really Thank you to save our life. I thank you for the general, for the captain of the U.S marine and for the representative of our solidarity. Hold my hand. We will take you the greatest place.” As soon as I heard his talk, There was a wind and I got the paper and It said “The real thing is also in the darkness.” When I tried to shake and hold his hand, Something was remembered and I didn’t shake and hold his hand and I got to the black hole! The real winners never shake their hands although they win. The real thing is also in the darkness.
 After I entered the hole I was in the mountain where I was in. I don’t know this is the real or not. I hope this is the real and I am confident It’s the real.

Saturday, August 6, 2011

Narrative Essay(My teacher)

My teacher

 Teacher is the navication which guide your long rode, your life. Good teacher can also influence us the great effect. They can make our life more happier than before. However, thesedays the people who really loves teacher are decreasing. Even they are fighting and abhoring each other. Fortunately, this case wasn't happen to me because of my great personality(it's true!!!!!) and my good teacher. I'll give you guys some illustration that is about my good teacher.
 When I was the sixth grade of elementary school, the time is when the start of school didn't start(the winter vacation wasn't over yet.) I went to my school to help my fifth homeroom teacher by volunteering. At that time, our teachers did duty not forcely), so I could many homeroom teachers. One of them was a man who is really tall and had a short hair like the soldier or marine, and he was really scared for me. Actually, at that time, I hoped he is not my homeroom teacher because of synthesizing his external appearnce, I decide he would be very strict. However, he was my homeroom teacher.(Oh noooooo!!!!!!)
 When we had the first meeting as my expection he wasn't funny and he was strict. His voice ton was low so it was scared. But, after few miutes, he gave us the registration to fill out. And he said "If all of your guys give it to me until tomorrow you will get more PE time for three hours, the day after two hours, two days after tomorrow one hour and three days after tomorrow there will be no more PE time." We was so surprised he gave us the great chance because we love PE. Eventually we gave all the registerations two days after tomorrow so, we had more PE time just one hour. But It was great. When we had the PE time we always played baseball which isn't real and kicking the ball wich is look like a soccer ball but it's actually used in the avoing game, so we called that ball 'avoiding ball' and I called this sport 'kicking ball'. Any way, for that reason there was no class to beat our class by kicking ball. (We were the champion my dude!!!!!!) He was strict not like the general men and also he is cautious and careful like the women. Also, he analyze almost everything and he had the great ability about that. Also, He was too logic, rational, reliable and reasonable although he is really funny like us. I can say although he is the human, he had the great and almost perfect. I had  lecture and live the most of school lives(in sixth grade) with him, so I relized there is nothing even we tried. So, its meaning is if we try to do everything we can do that. Perhaps, when he was a child he would be same as his friends. However, because of his efforts, he can be that person who has good personality and is almost the perfect person. For me, the lazy boy it wasn't touched for me, but after lived with him for few monthes I could relize the my limitation and disadvantages everything such as writing( He said "You don't need to write your own story in your dairy. You can and must write anout issues or something like the journal" So we wrote a large amount of writings you guys can't belive and can't even imagine. Because of that I can improve my writing skill and I can be good at writing everything than my peers. Thank you my homeroom teacher!!!!!), studying,  the way how to live and to be adapted to society, and how to ameliorate my personality. 
 I can also be influenced by my family and my surroundings such as environment. So I hope Don't misunderstand the most influency person or thing is teacher for me after reading my writings. It can be true, but there are a lot of things that influence to my whole life. Thank tou for reading my writing.  

Friday, August 5, 2011

Argumentative Essay Is TV good or bad? (Government)

Argumentative Essay
썸네일class: 24 name: Shin Jae Young(Peter)
After the 20th century, many conveniences in civilization emerged. Among those, there are conveniences which changed the wold especially the television which helped to communicate with the world, society and people. These days, there are many variations of televisions such as a smart tv, a cathode-ray tube and etc. Also, its qualities are getting better, however when the information society formed and the post modernism emrged, there are many oppoments to point out dermits of television. But, I strongly believe claim these are wrong and not rational, also I claim the television is the light, not the darkness. To support my motion, I'll indicate my three arguments the first is communication, the second is the most awesome way to relax and the last is the simplicity of getting information.
My first argument, communication, signifies the capability to communicate with people and the world. There are many cultures, heritages and countries in the television. It means it broadcasts many things. For reference, the definition of communicate is the act sharing and exchanging their information. Although there is no person or nothing in the television to communicate with you( you can receive it, but television can't receive it.), you can get some information, also others can do that. In the television, in conclusion, we can't exchange it, however we can perform the essence of communicating which is getting information with the television. Hence, we can communicate a lot of things with the television.
My second argument is tv is the best method to relax. The best method is sleeping. Howeverit's boring and you ncan't control it so, it can be harm because sleeping too much isn't good for your health. Hoever you can control tv. You just watching it so, its effect is simmilar with sleeping which doesn't need to do anything during doing it. You can take a rest and have fun with your television. Also, disabled person can enjoy it too.
 My last argument, sim[licity of getting infomation is using tv is simle to get information such as practical wisdom. It's true it's hard to find the information you want in the television. However finding ractical wisdom is much more simple than anything. If you want to find the common sense on the internet you don't knoe how to do that and in the book you have to rad all! However tv has a lot of chanels and you can change it quickly. You can also getpractical sense with fun and understand it very well. 
 Majority people think that tv is bad, not good. TV can have its disadvantages, but saying tv is bad is not good. Almost bad situations because of tv is happened when individuals couldn't control it. For that reason and my three arguments, I can say and strongly belive that tv is the light, not the darkness.

Friday, July 29, 2011

Introduction

   "Know yourself" The well known Greek philosopher lived in BC 469~ BC 399, Socrates said this saying. I know that and try to perform this but, I haven't do that. However, Today I can reflect on me myself because of  this homework, writing introduction about me myself. Before unfold my composition I have to tell you guys my name, Right?
   First of all, I'll introduce my names(including nicknames) and my characteristics of my body. My name is Shin Jae Young and my English name is Peter. And  my English nickname is 'Sebigbos' my history teacher A. Ganse made Which means 'the big boss'. Everybody thinks I'm much older than my peers, so I had a situation which my friend asked me "Are you a high school  student or Have you been to the army base". I was so angry so I replied "Absolutely not guy!" This is my funny and little ridiculous story. Anyway, I'm in the second grade of middle school and I live on Seoul. I haven't been to overseas so, my pronunciations and spellings may be little bit wrong. I'm much taller and bigger than my peers so that's the reason why my history teacher made my nickname 'Sebigbos'.
   Second of all, I'll explain about myself more deeply. My personality everybody wonder is very good!(It's real!!). Exactly I'm a little greedy about study, game, knowledge and etc. Also, I have a high competitive spirit and always kind of everybody. I'm a little bossy ,but I frequently accept your request. I want to be a diplomatic official and if i have many abilities to lead people, I want to be an UN Secretary general too!
Oh! the limited time is coming, so i have to finish my introduction right now immediately!
Have a great lives guys!!!!